There's no set rule on ambiguous pronouns, but I think I can improve that line without repeating the characters' names too much, so I will. Thank you for pointing it (and the other problematic stuff) out yo.
*cough cough* I do have a Leo boner. HOW DID YOU EVER NOTICE.
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Date: 2013-02-14 12:31 am (UTC)*cough cough* I do have a Leo boner. HOW DID YOU EVER NOTICE.