Yay, glad you liked! I am happy as long as I can make at least one person happy. :D
Thank you for the edits and the suggestions! I think "Tengen Guy and Strawberry Girl" sounds...really dirty, but I might go for it.
The breakup scene...hm, it does feel like it's destined, doesn't it? Yashiro somehow seems too go-focused to be quite right for Nase, who has shown that she has other interests as well. (Btw, there's a factual mistake in the ficlet. I double-checked and Yashiro is Hikaru's age, not Waya's.)
Ha ha, Ogata/Nase would be epically weird. Also illegal (but not in a few years)! But you're a writer with a light enough touch to pull it off. If you write it I will still make fun of you though.
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Date: 2012-11-29 07:50 am (UTC)Thank you for the edits and the suggestions! I think "Tengen Guy and Strawberry Girl" sounds...really dirty, but I might go for it.
The breakup scene...hm, it does feel like it's destined, doesn't it? Yashiro somehow seems too go-focused to be quite right for Nase, who has shown that she has other interests as well. (Btw, there's a factual mistake in the ficlet. I double-checked and Yashiro is Hikaru's age, not Waya's.)
Ha ha, Ogata/Nase would be epically weird. Also illegal (but not in a few years)! But you're a writer with a light enough touch to pull it off. If you write it I will still make fun of you though.