Secondly, thank you. :) I do think there are some problems with the writing (I keep revising it), but I'm proud of my ideas. I was a bit worried that Ami and Usagi sound more like mouthpieces than themselves, so I appreciate your comments. :)
Panopticon is scary, isn't it? I just wish I'd read 1984 or Brave New World, considering that those are supposed to be the books to read about dystopias.
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Date: 2006-04-02 07:28 am (UTC)Secondly, thank you. :) I do think there are some problems with the writing (I keep revising it), but I'm proud of my ideas. I was a bit worried that Ami and Usagi sound more like mouthpieces than themselves, so I appreciate your comments. :)
Panopticon is scary, isn't it? I just wish I'd read 1984 or Brave New World, considering that those are supposed to be the books to read about dystopias.