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flonnebonne ([personal profile] flonnebonne) wrote 2013-02-14 12:31 am (UTC)

There's no set rule on ambiguous pronouns, but I think I can improve that line without repeating the characters' names too much, so I will. Thank you for pointing it (and the other problematic stuff) out yo.

*cough cough* I do have a Leo boner. HOW DID YOU EVER NOTICE.

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