I think I was holding my breath while reading this. You pulled this off beautifully-- an Ender's Game/HnG crossover. Just, wow. It's mindblowing. I'm a huge fan of Ender's Game and of course, I'm a HnG fangirl so this is like a dream come true.
The dialogue is perfect-it's short, concise, and it seems to be straight from Orson Scott Card's books.
Hikaru is just wonderful in this. He's hopeful and he's still himself while Touya's jaded. And the go! You mixed Igo in this...
I love Isumi and Waya. Just everything about this is so realistic and haunting in a "I can't believe this isn't in the actual series" way. The action scenes are great, and just... *so gleeful*
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The dialogue is perfect-it's short, concise, and it seems to be straight from Orson Scott Card's books.
Hikaru is just wonderful in this. He's hopeful and he's still himself while Touya's jaded. And the go! You mixed Igo in this...
I love Isumi and Waya. Just everything about this is so realistic and haunting in a "I can't believe this isn't in the actual series" way. The action scenes are great, and just... *so gleeful*