You're--oh god, Ender's game and Hikago? That's--oh, brilliant. Firstly, the way you have Shindou and Touya both as Ender, as Ender knowing he had to crush to win, and Ender wondering what the hell it was all worth, how it was just an experiment, how it was all pointless. You have Sai--you have Sai in battle, you have Sai on a freaking spaceship in Hikaru's mind. igfdsvvhosld. really. that good. this was such a clever exercise, and because you have the personalities down damn well correctly, it's a joy to read.
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You're--oh god, Ender's game and Hikago? That's--oh, brilliant. Firstly, the way you have Shindou and Touya both as Ender, as Ender knowing he had to crush to win, and Ender wondering what the hell it was all worth, how it was just an experiment, how it was all pointless. You have Sai--you have Sai in battle, you have Sai on a freaking spaceship in Hikaru's mind. igfdsvvhosld. really. that good. this was such a clever exercise, and because you have the personalities down damn well correctly, it's a joy to read.
(let's just hope isumi got his wish)